hi I'm slightley new to spriting and need some feedback on some of my work

Well you could start by showing us your stuff so we have an idea of what you could work on. :)

hows this random sprite to get my gallery started

Interesting.

@Lucius:Try making your posts a bit more constructive and relevant...

That sprite doesn't look bad. I like it, it's very clean-cut. Try and see if you can make a neutral "standing pose."

Not bad at all.

Shutup.

stop spamming.

that sprite to be honest with you, made me lol. "Oshi- a gorgontaur is running after me jesus christ!"

only prob I got with it is I don't think the top colors go with the bottom.

Agreement on this statement.

It's a good splice, but considering that battle sprites aren't my forte, I think that's about all I can really say about it. I think it'd be interesting if you could make the tail into snakes, too, or something along the lines of being serpentine.

well how about this class tree featuring the trainee class
SQUIRE and the Gorgontaur's finished sprite
** credit for the name goes to Dark overlord Zack **

>_< c'mon guys i spent a long time on figuring out the tails and how scarry lugh and rei look. :| :| :|

Lurei's chin shoud be touched up. And maybe you want to use just 1 set of colors for the clothes. Right now, it looks more like a side by side comparison than an individual mug.

Stop spamming. FES has me for that

^^
What were you trying to do with that? That's not
how splices work.

ts not a splice im just comparing how similar they look

Dear, they're brothers. >>

yeah but they are almost completely identical

They're twins, IIRC.

check this out its me as a fire emblem character


(What class do I look like ???)

I'd say Knight/General.

Anyway, I see a lot of blue pixels at the hair, and I suggest to rethink the palette for the armor, using 3 shades instead of 2. Also, the trims look low quality. Work more on their outline

thank you for the class define but i ddint do the trim and all i did was recolor the armor where different shades were yeah ill fix the hair i was a lilttle huried when i made that one

I suggest trying colors from official mugs. You may also want to consider using darker colors since you have gold trim, it will stand out better.

ok the mug is fixed and i made one of my sis also including the male dancer
ok the male dancer will not have a battle sprite unless anyone else wants to do it

The Male dancer mug, the ribbons (the pink stuff) they look kind of stiff, stuff like that tend to have a more flexible look to them. I'd also recommend getting a Photobucket or Imageshack account for posting sprites and stuff. ;)

okay after going through some folders i found these which i most likely did last year

except for that last one
:wallbash: :lol:

People plz sum things just cant go un noticed take a look i'm not a total wash out at spriting

Please don't double post to bump your topic. People will post when they want to. Our activity level is low, so I'm sorry if not everyone will notice your stuff.

oh ok thank you for the information

I like your ideas for monsters (especially # 1, 3, and 4 down the list). I think your skelington/zombie has protential in particular. Keep at it :thumbsup:

nifty idea on the last one!

and here comes more of my clan

@4th and 5th: eughh!
Do you mind putting IMG tags instead if attaching the image
to the post?

Now after some slight edits I made two more mugs

Could you link that or something? It's stretching the page.

i tryed i didn't work
but this does work + i added new faces and some name changes

They're not bad splices, a little editting wouldn't hurt though:

Caylee's neck needs to be shaded a bit where the neck meets the cloth.
The left side of Jack's neck could be smoothed out a bit.
You idea for Emily is good, just needs some editting. Mainly the hair, since some parts got cut off and some parts are overlapping her body/clothes.
And Kleet... has a very small nose... unless that's what you were going for because it looks alright.

alright well hows this (click on link)
http://www.majhost.com/cgi-bin/gallery.cgi?i=2078241

I hope this isnt considered double posting but ive been grounded and now I want to make some sort of contribution

Double posting like that is a norm, heck I had a triple post one time. The problem with this one is your trying to merge FE6 colors and FE7 colors together, that tends to not work well cause FE6 colors have a little bit more washed out look, might want to add some shading where his mask like thing is covering his face, and also have to place shading around where the dark gray covers his clothing too.

BETTER?????

dam caps lock :unsure: :unsure:

:( slightly, you still have the outline though where you added the face cloth, you have to try and blend it in a bit, it would also help if you added some shading where the cloth meets his face, also the hair and eye colour is a bit bright imo but thats up to personal preference.

well every thing else aside i have an idea but im not skilled enough to do it any one want to help with shading and making the sheet full credit goes to whom ever can figuer it out