I know I'm not the most active member on this board, but FES has to have some of the best spriters and pixel artists, and every critique I've gotten here has helped me out a lot.
Well, one piece I wanna pick up is a very large image of a couple of characters.
I used nothing but MS Paint and an old scanner for this. First off, I scanned it (duh).
Original scan:

Second I lined it.
Line up:

Then I saved it as a 16 bit .bmp to turn all the paper and lines into gray and black, then got rid of them. That's why I used bright 16 bit colors to outline. I used multiple colors so it'd be easier to not have everything have a black outline.
Lone line art:

Finally, I began to color and shade.
Now:


I already know this is coming. A lot of the shading is pillow-y. But I think current my strong points are her face, her left hand, the shine on the gauntlet on her right hand, and the sword and the claw on her weapon look good to me.