Well, I've made up a storyline about a young 10 year old thief becoming legendary hero. The main character, Vurn (like my username!) starts off as a young orphanned theif and it all changes one when he accidently rescues a 15 year old girl named Eve who takes Vurn to Fabroyson who is a rogue, assassin, bounty hunter, and mercenary all in one little kid body, which is wierd, but there is a story behind that, too.

Any questions about this, contact me at vurnwillamsvs.hags@gmail.com

So liek... are you gonna make a sprite comic out of it or something

I didn't really get that far, yet.

How's THIS!



Heheh, not really that good, though.

Is there any reason you have these sprites larger than game size? Oh and how does that swordmaster see anything?! D:

Well, I enlarged every image by twice it's original size. And the swordmaster had red eyes, but the part showing is too dark, that it sort of blends in. I might change that, except I might draw him, so he might look like Duelo McFile from Vandread, except black hair, red eyes, and a weapon that spells "Hey, if you can see me, you might wish you hadn't if you've got enough time left."

OK, Imight make a comic, though it might take a little while. I have to practive some stuff like this.

are you going to be making mugs of the characters?

I already have, but some aren't that good and I have them all up in one page, so I need to seperate them, first.

This looks like it belongs more in the Sprite Galleries section. Ker-moved.

OK, I just made this one up. It's Fabroyson, but with wings and a different body (I felt lazy and gave him a swordsmaster body instead of an assassin's)

I think this is a bit better than my others

the wings are kinda weird

Yah, they ain't perfect, but I'll try to fix that

When you enlarge everything, it looks too blocky and pixelated. Keep everything the normal size and it should look smoother

OK. I'll shrink them ASAP, but not now. I also made an age progression of Vurn, 'cause you can't be 10 years old the whole time in a story, unless the person being told it is ten years old.

This didn't take me long to make, 'cause I'm still too cheap. I'm working on that, too.

Well, I had some time to waste yesterday, and I felt like doing whatnot. So I made the 3 trainees in the Sacred Stones with better weapons. They're

Blade Kid

Axe Kid

Spear Kid

Spear Kid kinda sucks though. I had to changethe whole spear position and add an elbow, so I sort of screwed up there. I'm going to make some others likie these, like the sword kid, probably Ross or Ewan based, and with a better sword than the Blade Kid.

Why is the Blade Kid blurry?

Pretty sure it was jpeg'd

Nope. PNG.

Well then, I'm perplexed =/

Maybe imageshack turns png into jpeg...?

And I noticed that Amelia's legs were blurry too o_ô

I really don't know why he's blurry. Computer error? Imageshack wasn't really working for me at that time, so I think that's it.

Well, I finally started making sprites again after a while. I just made this!

As you may notice, the class is Hero, but the little overworld sprite thingy is Roy Master Lord. I just thought Hero fitted this, rather than Lord. I'm going to make some battle sceen or something pretty soon. Laters! :thumbsup:

*Gouges out eyes*

Ah, much better. If you're going to simply recolor an existing sprite, don't make it make my eyes bleed. Use colors already in the games, and keep the difference between shades reasonable.

Blue

I just finished the war scene thing. I edited a few things, but it turned out better than I thought it would. A bit too much wyverns, though.

At the end, you'll see a shirtless journeyman. Kinda wierd, eh? O.o I screwed up a bit while making it, though, so it could be better. :wallbash: It was suposed to be a character I made up, young, little, surprisingly strong, etc... I'll probably edit this one so some of the characters have captions. :thumbsup: I slacked off there, too, but I'll get to it tomorrow, I think.
Oh yah, the mugshot in that statsheet just somehow got like that, I'm not sure how. >:/

It's a pretty cool concept, but my one problem with it is that it isn't so much a war as a string of characters. In fact, you can even see the seam of where you started each background.
The part with a lot of wyverns gives the best sense of a war to me

i think it's pretty cool!

That was suposed to be a battle at the end of the storyline. Pretty much a war between corrupted people and people who aren't evil. The paladin, general with and axe, blonde Lyn, assassin on the left, the rogue, the winged guy, the master lord, the swordmaster (blurry), the warrior, the shirtless journeyman, and most of the wyvern riders are the good guys. Now, time to work on this one nameless sprite.
:headbang:

Finished the nameless sprite! This guy is Leo, some guy I just made up.

Well, Exxucus, is this better.

Edited the colors a bit. I forgot the scar thingy I was about to put on there.

Well, mugshots and thier sprites for the 3 main characters.

Vurn
Eve
Fabroyson

These are the characters' final forms. Fabroyson was a little difficult, though, cause he's such a dark character.

The black looks god-awful

I'll try to fix that, but it might take a while

Is it pure black? Because other than technical shit nobody cares about, it just looks awful.

Try the borders of mugs for all three gens if you need a palette.

1000 posts? Nice! High 5's all around!

Nice war scene :thumbsup: It's cool to see that one wyvern rider emerge from the dark part to attack. I want to try to make something like that now.

I've edited the first sprites I've ever made, which I've never posted. They're suppose to be the next main characters of the storyline. The first one here is........ Chase!

He's the swordsman and leader of this trio. He practically is the one who tells the other 2 what to do, in battle or just some practical joke. The sprite didn't turn out as bad as I thought. I recolored and edit the mugshot. It use to be green haired and nothing special. I think I screwed up on the second sword's handel on the first sprite. On the sprite on the right, I just screwed up on the handel altogether. The mugshot I changed from the first I made of him. Differnet hair and clothing color and stuff.
Next up is.........Kevin!

Kevin's practically the muscle of the group. He does all the hard to do stuff. Need to fight in a boxing match against a heavyweight? Send Kevin in your place. Need some one strong enough to load that boulder in your onager? Kevin's the answer. Well, the sprites not much than a recolor of Hector. That's about it.
Last but not least.....................................................................Ace!

Ace is the halberdier of the group. He is that one puzzel piece that completes the puzzel. He's also the tactition. He plans some of their battles, pranks, and what to put in in army food to make it taste better. OK, maybe not the lunch part, but he suppose to be very skilled at many things. Well, the sprites are more recolors except the spear, which is a General's. I had to edit it a bit to make it fit better, which I failed somewhere there. I forget.

All in all, They are recolors and better than the first ones I made of them. I'm going to edit this one I made with these. He's pretty much a Necromancer, which in the story is called the Shaman Lord.

they're pretty good for simple edits

In this storyline, though, most of the characters can use both weapons and magic, so this is not your adverage Fire Emblem. Like this Fabroyson character can use pretty much any type of magic. I'm going to work on an Erika based battle sprite (which I've been meaning to do for quite some time now) and maybe another war scene, except in a castle or something.

Well, I made this out of boredom.

I think some of the letters need less spacing. Other than that, I think I'm OK.

u have some pretty cool stuff