Journey kids is about two friends named darkray and qtip who are on a journey to be the best! along there way they will meet new friends great challenges and there destiny!

part 1

part 2

yo dawg I'm gonna move this topic to where it should be.

also I dun know what's going on

it's supposed to be like there is a thief and were chashing him it will make more since when i post the rest!

part 3

hey how about we make two diffrent stories with the same people u know :)

part 4

part 5

well i was hoping that you would write some more to it okay i have one more part then it's your turn

part 6

1. You stretched the page >_<

2. I think you should spend more time making large® episodes rather than just small two-section "parts".

Other than that, good.

Isaac has a point there. I know you're might excited just to get it done and posted, but you can't make it too small, then it really isn't done, cause usually people expect more, except in the newspaper funnies

part 7

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I'm sorry, that dialogue is so flat I half expect the next chapter to be:

Hector Ostia who was Uther Ostia's brother was one day an office typing on a computer. He got an email from his brother that said that brigrands and pirates were attacking his place and aksed him for help so he went.

part 8

part 9

part 10

part 11

part 12

sorry about only 2 images per post

part 13

part 14

Oh my stars! Part 13 and 14 are twins! Ahhhhhhhh!!!

cool comic i like how its goin we have very diffrent stories haha

Did you make the dog yourself?

It's downright terrible, to be honest. Sorry. There doesn't seem to be much of a plot, and the whole thing appears to be insanely childish.

I think you need a lot more conflict, maybe less recruits, no puppies, and a little bit more serious.

yes i made it myself it took an extremely long time and now you all hate it.

It's not so much the dog I dislike as much as it is the story. Don't take it personally.

part 15

part 16

Okay, dude. Now that you're using a pic hosting site you can stop making these comics two panels long. Also, WTF just happened? It looks like your characters just committed manslaughter for no real reason, thus making them unlikable douches.

Actually, I believe that's murder 2, not manslaughter.

I thought 2nd degree murder was pre-meditated...

Well, after 16 chapters we have: Lyn wandering randomly and joins the army of two little kids; they camp which is really, really random; go to a random town; get another recruit who just ditches his post for no reason and would probably be exiled for doing so; they buy a puppy which has yet to do anything at all (good job though, that was actually a really good sprite); then the slaughter of professionally trained soldiers by two little kids, a deserter, a teenage girl, and a dog for NO REASON AT ALL

That about right? Each character has 0 depth and no motivation at all for joining the 'army' that goes around slaughtering innocent people

No, murder one is pre-med.

murder two:
1) an intentional killing that is not premeditated or planned, nor committed in a reasonable "heat of passion"

MANSLAUGHTER - The unlawful killing of a human being without malice or premeditation, either express or implied; distinguished from murder, which requires malicious intent.

The difference, I guess, is motive. I don't know the motive, but it looked malicious to me.

EDIT: After a long discussion with my sister, we've decided this is murder two. Book 'em, boys.

ya know what u all suck! first of all the random inocent people happen to be enimies, so it's reasonable and it wouldn't be murder it's self-defense which is legal! >:( >:(

But that is what dialouge is for: Explaining these things in an appealing way while building character, rather than telling us outside of the comic that they are enemies.

@Larry: Ah, man, I completely forgot. I guess I learned nothing from my business and personal law course.

@Darkray; relax, we're just being silly idiots.

@Ex; It helps that my mom is a prosecutor.