since you all happen to hate my old comic I am going to make a brand new one, using the tips u critics(JK)gave me :D so hope u like it.

Just make sure you use narration. :D

NARRATION RUINS THE FLOW comics are stories told with picture and dialouge not narration.Narration makes it more of a novel not a comic

do whatever you want darkray this guys a hack

Wow, you really must hate me... I don't believe that was really called for.

But I guess you are right. My apologies to both of you...

don't see why you'd toss your old one out the window but okay. good luck homeslice, I look forward to it.

offtopic: come on guys, get along... or you're gonna feel my girth.

so when is the show gunna start c'mon darkray where's this new comic

it's a lot harder then regular stuff since it's moctly cutom right now i have a ufo, a backgrond and the aliens and spacemen and some other stuff i just gotta think more bout da story

need any help

thnx but i'm good

Sounds good. Take your time.

Space Sprites is about the team called galactic-x who are fighting for freedom of there planet glader, from the evil aliens the G-A and there leader Dark Xavier.
Here are the pictures of the galactic-x:
there spaceship the galaxy raider
Leader Cody G.:
BJ Harp:
Space Infantry:

and thats the Galactic-X for ya'll i'll post the G-A next

Although it looks like you just rip'd some Halo sprites, I can't wait to read this.
Also, narration is a big part of a comic. I'm not saying to put a box with narration in every panel, but at least announce what is happening - comics are not pure imagery. (even a word?)

heres the alien side:
Spaceship Mother Base 0.1
Leader Dark Xavier:
General Zadez:
General Kyrpoyed:
General Zecty:
Infantry:
soon i'll start posting the the real comic <:)

Dark Xavier is just a negative flip of Kyrpoed, and it looks pretty dam lame. Using that same image as the two other aliens makes him look not as superior as he should.

Also, I'd like to hear the storyline - it's hard to get exited about something I know jack-shit about.

the alien infantry looks like YODA

thats cause it is yoda

Why he isn't like general or something then 'o.O or it is like when he was little kid or something XD nvm.

this is the 2nd line of infantry for the the Galactic-x

here they are in there battle position

so ur doing a starwars sprite comic

Attack of the clones! Are you also making a Star Wars comic or are those characters in this comic?

They are in the Tri-Force position.

I thought it was this guy for a second o_ô :

Newfags can't triforce.

Fagyt

No u.

BTW, when the fuck are we going to see some comics? I could've made a fucking truckload of comics by now!

nvr i decided i had more important things to do

I guffawed

Yeah, at least notify us, you dumbass.
There, I said it. Rack my warn up by 10%, but at least I got it out.

Honestly, I should do more than 10% cause you seem to flame the poor guy any chance you get |:

Yeah, I deserve it. I've gotten outta hand. He just needs to act more maturely. I know he's a 10yr old, but he should at least act with common sense.

As for the comics, when do ya think we could see some?

he said he quit so I'll just lock this until he asks me to unlock it...