Okie, here's the first photo for you to start your critique...:)
IMHO ....
The shot is distracting. Background is very cluttered with too many lines and droplets. (Maybe it's just me :P )
If I were to re-take the shot, I may recompose with a cleaner background, try to bring out at least one droplet - perhaps also try to capture a reflection within to make the image stand out further.
What do you think ?
Good observation and analysis Pete.
Yes, focusing on a single droplet and having a reflection in it would strengthen the composition of the image.