Title: They Are Choosing The Perfect Ring
Description: lamp post with a camera
stone - November 23, 2008 11:07 AM (GMT)
my cousin and fiancee choosing a ring...
gimme more... comments and critiques...
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stone - November 23, 2008 11:08 AM (GMT)
stone - November 23, 2008 11:09 AM (GMT)
stone - November 23, 2008 11:10 AM (GMT)
stone - November 23, 2008 11:11 AM (GMT)
soulexpress - November 23, 2008 11:14 AM (GMT)
1. 2nd shot is a little blur and under-exposed
2. Both shots have distracting elements at the left side of the frame
3. Watch out for over-exposure where their hands are due to the display lights
4. Try to maximize usage of your live-view cos that'll give u more angles, especially during ocassions where you've limited space
For #4, shall leave you to brainstorm how you would've achieved that based on that actual day when you were trying to capture those special moments.
However, I do love that candid expression on the bride-to-be's face :) Good job on that !
soulexpress - November 23, 2008 11:19 AM (GMT)
1. I'd have preferred to shoot in landscape for the 3rd shot (That's just me)
2. 4th shot is interesting, good use of the mirror but you can consider trying out different framing of the bride-to-be for a more intimate shot (The groom-to-be is a bit extra in the photo I feel)
3. 5th shot - Nice smile on the bride-to-be, but where should your focus be in this case (can think about this)
4. 5th shot again - The mirror feels very sandwiched between the couple ...
I'd say, great efforts put in given the limitation you have. I'm pretty surprised that the staff even allowed you to shoot in the first place. You must've put on your "Ashton-Charm" aey :lol:
stone - November 23, 2008 11:31 AM (GMT)
Thanks Peter,
i am sure i got the Ashton-charm what i dont even realize haha..
but i do ask for permission first la...
they also understand it will be very special for both of them i guess...
now i realize how difficult to capture the expression... missed a few good shot!
soulexpress - November 23, 2008 11:38 AM (GMT)
| QUOTE (stone @ Nov 23 2008, 07:31 PM) |
Thanks Peter,
i am sure i got the Ashton-charm what i dont even realize haha..
but i do ask for permission first la...
they also understand it will be very special for both of them i guess...
now i realize how difficult to capture the expression... missed a few good shot! |
Well ... it never is easy, but you never know unless you try. So, good job done !
doug - November 23, 2008 12:54 PM (GMT)
| QUOTE (stone @ Nov 23 2008, 07:07 PM) |
my cousin and fiancee choosing a ring...
gimme more... comments and critiques...
1. |
If u edit it putting a frame heart shape it would be perfect... :rolleyes:
Jeff - November 23, 2008 03:59 PM (GMT)
| QUOTE (soulexpress @ Nov 23 2008, 07:19 PM) |
4. 5th shot again - The mirror feels very sandwiched between the couple ...
I'd say, great efforts put in given the limitation you have. I'm pretty surprised that the staff even allowed you to shoot in the first place. You must've put on your "Ashton-Charm" aey :lol: |
sandwich ! :lol:
I think because he just shot people not the ring itself, so the staff still allowed him.
stone - November 23, 2008 04:10 PM (GMT)
ya the stuff did mention as long as not the product...
they are quite friendly and ok with it...
the stuff even said, she want to put make up then i was like thinking, duh!! my object is them not u haha...
of cos she's joking la hehe...
Jeff - November 24, 2008 12:03 AM (GMT)
| QUOTE (stone @ Nov 24 2008, 12:10 AM) |
ya the stuff did mention as long as not the product...
they are quite friendly and ok with it...
the stuff even said, she want to put make up then i was like thinking, duh!! my object is them not u haha...
of cos she's joking la hehe... |
She ?? Oh the lady in the picture 3 :lol: :lol: