Title: After Master Peter...hehe
doug - January 20, 2009 09:28 AM (GMT)
Pls post ur comments...Thx
doug - January 20, 2009 09:32 AM (GMT)
found the balloon very eye catching so i took this shot down... A little panning style ey?
doug - January 20, 2009 09:42 AM (GMT)
doug - January 20, 2009 09:45 AM (GMT)
The starry starry nite effect... ;)
doug - January 20, 2009 09:47 AM (GMT)
doug - January 20, 2009 09:52 AM (GMT)
Did you saw this Bro Peter?? ;)
doug - January 20, 2009 09:54 AM (GMT)
Ice cream cones but where are the ice creams??
soulexpress - January 20, 2009 11:36 AM (GMT)
Bro, for photo critique, try to number the photos eventho you've posted them in seperate messages. This way when readers give their feedback, they'd not need to quote the previous message and end up including the photo again. This way, loading is much faster and frees up server space as well.
soulexpress - January 20, 2009 12:08 PM (GMT)
#1
- Interesting capture of movement in the train station, but would've preferred it to be in alignment i.e. signboard is parallel to the photo
- Plus, the 2 lights in the photo upper left / right are a bit of an eye sore to me
- Great attempt for hand-held shot in low light albeit still blur
#2
- Balloon's cute, plus its colour adds contrast to the photo and the lady is looking into the direction of the balloon which helps "flow" the image
- However try not to crop of the person's legs so abruptly
- If you have to, crop off at mid-body or mid-shin and not near the joints e.g. ankles, knees, etc.
- Would've been great if you caught the balloon tack-sharp i.e. frozen in action
#3
- Turkish ice-cream ? Nice ! Didn't see this when I was down at Chinatown that night.
#4
- Subject in foreground is underexposed and no bokeh in the background hence it makes the overall photo look very messy. If done properly, believe the redness of the foreground subject will stand out more.
#5
- You could've gone wider when shooting these paintings, adds more symmetry to the photo I feel but nonetheless, the beauty of the colours in the painting makes this photo stand out.
- Try working more on handheld shots and preventing handshake.
#6
- Nope bro, I didn't see these guys in action that night.
- Back to the photo, they are underexposed hence a bit of a pity.
- What you can try is to use rear sync, throw a flash to freeze the subject while ambient light is being captured. The motion blur might be more interesting thereafter.
#7
- Ice-cream cones ? Hmz ... well if I've to be a tough critic, again I'd say the photo's underexposed plus colours don't stand out. In addition, it doesn't "wow" me.
- You can try shooting from the top, closer in, the circles of the cones may bring a more interesting composition.
That's just my 2 cents once again, never right nor wrong. Keep up the good work and keep shooting.
Cheers !