Hihi, any comments? Do you like the shot? Care to explain?

The image apply the rule of third and the subject got eyes contact... But somehow it stil lack the wow effect... From the model catch eye only can see 1 light source, maybe it too straight should be 45o so to create some shadow on her face. She should tit a bit to her right... Isit? :unsure:

Hi Luke,

Wonderful observation! That's right, if I'm the photographer I would probably what you suggest. :)

However, we do not know exactly what the photographer is trying to achieve...this might be what he is looking to achieve.

JW

i find her face too "bright" as compared to the rest of her body.

almost like a mime with the white painted face - a bit unnatural...

just my 2 cents worth...

The photographer is more on capturing the expression of the face of the model. Would be better with the face facing up and some hand expression. I am learning too.