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Title: First Photo Critique


fredysen - April 27, 2009 03:37 PM (GMT)
this shot is taken 1 month ago..
its my first day handling DSLR camera.. :)
its a candid shot i take with the 75-300 kit lens
photo

Isaac - April 28, 2009 07:25 AM (GMT)
Great photo!

But perhaps some eye contact from either the child or the auntie would help enhance the photo..

Make sure you get some catchlights in the eyes as well!

soulexpress - April 28, 2009 12:50 PM (GMT)
Likewise, I feel it is a great attempt being ur first on a DSLR.

However, would've loved to see a little more space in the photo and if at all possible, the little girl looking back up at the old lady as a result creating a synergy between the 2 subjects.

fredysen - April 28, 2009 02:35 PM (GMT)
hi peter and issac..
thanks for the comments... :D




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