Name:Kysra K'usa'ra
Race:Asari
Gender:Female
Age:150
Allegiance:Liandri
Rank:
Class:Asari Commando
Picture: (optional)
Biography:
Kysra was born in one of the big cities of of th asari homeworld. She was conceived through a melding of a powerful turian vanguard and her mother who was an asari commando. Her father was killed in action against krogan mercenaries who attacked a Turian colony. This seemed to upset her mother but typical of the asari did not grieve over her loss.
Her training was typical. Even for an asari her biotics were powerful. What concerned her trainers was, by asari standards, she was unstable. Their minds were changed as she progressed and seemed to level out. When she began to level out her instructors regarded her as eccentric. She reveled in combat and pushing her biotics to the absolute limit. Many times she wouldnt even use her weapons and just use warp and watch them fall.
She never allied with a matriarch, but instead went her own way. She traveled the galaxy learning from other species biotic specialists. From human biotic adepts to the Krogan Battlemasters. She took from them their species understanding of biotics and their tactics. She spent a decade perfecting her understanding of biotics and combat applications.
Her first test came in the form of a geth raid. A human colony was being overwhelmed and the inhabitants being slaughtered as they tried to retreat. It was then that Kysra unleashed her abilities. At first it was a slow build up a geth tropper being caught in a singularity field, then another being thrown into a building. One of the geth units attempted to take cover behind some crates and unlike some asari who would just lift the crates she hurled a pure biotic attack against the crate itself destroying it and the geth behind it.
That was the first part. When the geth got to close she unsheated her sword and began slashing and stabbing the geth with the speed and skill born of her race and tempered by training. In the end she saved the colonists with the help of the defense force who finally arrived. The human colony was grateful for the black garbbed and hooded biotic who saved them. She simply nodded and took the next ship off the planet.
Her exploits during her travels garnered the attention of the liandri. She signed up for a rather extravagent fee. Her price was high she wasnt some military washout recruit she was highly trained and disciplined. And a little over the top when engaged in combat.
Special Abilities:
Singularity
Lift
Push
Warp
Weapons:
Modified Krogan Dueling Sword
Standard Liandri weapons
Biotic Amp: Savant X
Okay, I will stat this before I approve: the way you describe her makes her more of an Adept than a commando, but even then, 'ripping people apart' is not a thing you can do with biotics... unless you consider Warp to be that, inwhich case it's ok ^_^
However, remember that, With Biotics, you have to expend the eezo nodes in the chars body, so she can't PERPETUALLY maintain such high levels of biotics use. Basically I'm telling you to be realistic and not godmod
Other than that, APPROVED
corrected the bio with more specific uses of biotics. I had always assumed asari commandos were the asari version of a vanguard with just decades more training. To my perception the commandos were just biotic soldiers.
ok, the changes are all good ^_^
Have at it now!