Name: Jax Kiralao
Race: Turian
Gender: Male
Age: 41
Allegiance: Citadel
Rank: C-Sec Network
Class: Engineer
Height: 5'13''
Apperence: Dark blue skin color, black iris color. Plasma scarring on right arm,
Service Record:
Born on the mining asteroid colony in the Grissom system, Jax was educated by the mining corporation and taught in computer engineering. He later moved with his guardians to the Citadel, continuing his education on the Citadel he made improvements on computer engineering and later figure he would make proud to his guardians before the First Contact War came.
During the First Contact War, Jax's guardians left the Citadel for Noveria as they were hired on for the Noveria Development Corportion for further development on the minerals being mined for further weapons research. A renegade group of humans ambushed the site killing 30 NDC employee's including both of his guardian parents. Jax was left alone, fearing that he might become chosen for the Council's core analyst, he withdrew from further education and joined C-Sec. He was trained in simple weapons handling and computer analyst, breaking codes and finding hackers through-out the Citadel.
Few years later after the First Contact War,Jax continues being a computer analyst for C-Sec, he no longer enjoys the presence of humans being around him unless the job calls for it. Jax is a quiet Turian he works with his team of computer analyst but employs himself on working alone for most of the time.
Approved.
Nice, a techie for C-Sec. Except one that doesn't get along with humans.
Um, slight issue with the timing of the First Contact War. That happened in 2157. Current timeline is at 2202 and with Jax's age, it doesn't mesh well with Jax's promotion (though the incident with his guardians is fine if you interpret "after the First Contact War" as being some years after).
Yeah figures, I was trying to compute with it, and I will fix it.
Good luck with finding an active RP here. I fear they are few and far between.