Character Information:

Real Name: Reena de Hoon
Code Name: Toxica
Eye Color: Right: Blue Left: Green
Hair Color: Black
Height: 5”7
Weight: 127 lbs
Orientation: Straight??
Affiliation: X-men, might change
Age: 19
Play By: Mila Kunis
Original or Canon: Original

Basic Physical Description:
Reena is a young girl around 19 year old with a normal build. Her black hair falls just over her shoulders in a curly mass. She spends a lot of time on her looks which you can see in her face and her whole body, also in the clothing she chooses, they always match. She has her two different eye colors which is truly the feature that attracts most attention.

Her body is slim and tight thanks to her training as cheerleader and everything. She keeps in good shape. Her arms and legs are slim. She has enough strength to lift herself or someone about her own weight. She isn't super strong or anything.

Personality:
Reena can come over kinda dumb in some times. She doesn’t listen well to what people tell her, or to well and picks out what she wants to hear. Other than this she is a fun going girl who is truly living up to the saying: Girls just wanna have fun. She spends a lot of time with her school friends and tends to try and set things to her way. However if it doesn’t work out she won’t get really mad.

She won’t get mad easily. However when you get her that far, hide. She has the nasty habit of forgiving very quickly and even after people have done unforgivable things to her. She tends to be more submissive than leader.

When you do get her mad she will stop at nothing to mentally destroy you. Since she has had this happened to herself Reena knows just how to do it to others. It is her more darker side that emerges then. When you hurt her or when you really went to far in her eyes. However she is also forgiving so after a while she will forgive you and just move on with her life while you live on with your life.

Mutant Powers:
Rina has the ability to poison people by skin touch. When she touches you the first five seconds you will will feel dizzy and sick, like you have the flu or something. If she holds on a bit longer it will become like a fever, this mostly kicks in after holding on for over 15 minutes. If the contact is hold on long enough, like 30 minutes she is able to kill someone. She can also make plants die by touch. However it has to be skin on skin contact, otherwise it won't work. Neither with her hair.

Longer in the rp when Toxica grows a bit stronger she will be able to blow out some toxic breath which will only weaken her opponent to a minimum, perhaps enough so she can hold on long enough. However this will be in speculation with the Staff of this forum.


Weaknesses:
When the person wears clothes her powers have no effect. She has to make skin on skin contact with someone. And since she mostly wears clothes that cover most of her body she first has to take off her gloves before she can go into the attack which takes a certain amount of seconds to do.
She isn't super powered. She can only hold on for so long and certainly in the first five seconds it is easy to get away from her. Since you will not feel that weakened yet.

When she gets her new power you can simply hold in your breath and nothing will happen. However when you do breath in a larger amount might render you weakened. When the toxic air is blown back to her Reena is affected as well. She will be weakened... note that she isn't affected by her other skin to skin contact power.


Other Abilities/ talents:
Reena is a very good gamer. She spends a lot of time playing on her nintendo and playstation. She is very addicted to this.
She is very social and hangs out with friends whenever she can.
She is a great shopper and knows a lot about fashion.
She is a cheerleader and so very atlethic and acrobatic.
She knows how to plan her attacks and make them work... most of the time.

Basic History:
Reena was born in a happy family just south of Breda. She grew up happily and surrounded by her older sister and an older brother. They spend most of their time playing outside or fighting over who would get behind the computer. On Christmas they would put up the tree together and on other holidays there was peace around the house.
She went to school at the age of 4 and did pretty well in her class. She soon got friends in her class and often played at their house, or her friends came over to her.

When she went to high school it was no problem to make new friends. Her parents had moved to a nearby town, Oosterhout. Where her father would be closer to work. It took her two weeks to become cheerleader. Now she walked with the more popular girls. They spend girls nights at each other's place and often made each other up, or tried different cuts. All in all a very social girl who had the normal amount of friends and did normal stuff on her free evenings. Beside this she had a small job on Saturday to get money to buy her clothes.

In the higher classes of High school Reena became more and more popular. Being dressed in fashion all the time she became head cheerleader. On Saturday she made her appearance on parties from other popular kids and every now and then on parties of the least popular kids to show she wasn't all that of a b*tch. She went out with boys and came home late. School however was still her number one priority so her parents didn't mind.

After her wonderful time in high school Reena went to college. Also here she made friends easily and golden times lay ahead. She went through school like a charm. When her powers began to develop, she was working with her cheer leading team of college to get their dance right. After making skin contact with two of the cheerleaders they became ill. She hid her powers from others using gloves and a scarf, still looking as fashionably as ever. She however doesn’t know what will await her when people fine out just what she can do... she isn’t even sure herself.

When she came home one day she saw someone sitting at the table. Introducing to be a teacher at a school for mutants like her. At first Reena rejected the idea to go there. She lived here in Holland and had her friends here. To go to New York would make her start all over again... and her english wasn't all that well. However after some time arguing she did come and now spends her time at Xavier's School for Gifted Youngsters.

Citations: Is a Original :D


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Sample RP:
Reena was on her way home. Her hair dancing around her shoulders and her eyes cast ahead. People didn’t seem to have trouble with the fact she had two different eye colors. Sure the whole mutant thing wasn’t as bad here yet as in America, lucky for her. In her arms she held some books hugged to her chest while her backpack hang over her shoulder. She walked along her heels clicking on the pavement.

She made her way home slowly and looked at the house she now a days called home. Her father had worked hard to be able to pay for such a house. She walked up the driveway and started looking for her keys in her pockets. Finding them she opened the door and pushed it open. “Mom! I am home!” She yelled and walked on down the hall. She threw her backpack under the stairs and lay her books on it. Taking off her coat she revealed an outfit covering her body with exception of her face.

She looked up as she heard her mother talk to someone. Probably a friend of her. She hang up her coat and got the books walking in. Her eyes fell on her mother sitting at the table along with someone else. “Mom... what is going on here?” She asked as she saw the look on her mother face. Mostly filled with worry.

Her mother got up and walked over to Reena. “We have something to tell you dear.”

Reena looked at the other person and back at her mother. She then sat down and lay her books on the table. “What’s up?” She asked and looked from her mother to the stranger.


Player Information
Name: Wolvie X Girl// Reena
Contact Information:
Msn: Wicked_soul@live.nl
Yahoo: Purewickedsoul
Aim: Purewickedsoul
Desired Member Title: A Poisonous touch
Other characters at MM?: Nope, just this one :D
How did you find us?: You advertised on my Site: Alliana's Team

This bio has no major problems, but just needs some expansion. Every section is kind of hitting at bare minimums, and especially the history and personality sections need to be expanded.

I would also recommend running a grammar check, just to clear up a few errors.

No major issues though - thank you and welcome.

ok I will change as soon as I can,

right now I am off to bed. It's very late here and I am tired.

I will have edited tomorrow :D

Made the modifications :D

I am kind of confused by this: her history describes her as going to Xavier's Institute and delved into that story, yet her affiliation puts her as neutral but with the Brotherhood eventually... the two don't add up.

My only other concern is this - your sample post reflects the appropriate length for a day to day, simple post on our board. With a sample post, however, we generally expect to be "wowed" or see a longer, grammatically perfect, in depth post. Would an average post from you look like this? Would it be longer? Shorter?

I made her orriginally to be X-men on other sites.

Here I wanna try Brotherhood, but I don't see the brotherhood come and pick her up.

My posts would be longer and mostly also depends on what others post.

Ok, and that is fine but you would still need to modify her history to make sense in that context before we can reevaluate for acceptance. As of right now, her history ends with her living at the Xavier Institute, which according to your choice of affiliation is simply not the case.

Thank you!

Edited my affiliation

I edited.....