The army so far:

Lord Commander Eidolon (Chapter Master)-156pts
Master Crafted Thunderhammer, Master Crafted Bolter and Artificer Armour

Captain Solomon Demeter (Captain)-112pts
Master Crafted Chainsword, Master Crafted Bolter and Artificer Armour

Command Squad-226
Sergeant-Terminator Honours, Bolt Pistol, Power Fist
Company Champion-Power weapon, Combat Shield and Bolt Pistol
Company Standard Bearer-Chainsword, Company Standard
Apothecary-Chainsword,Narthecium and Reductor
Astartes-Bolter
Rhino(Command Vehicle)

Techmarine-170pts
Full Servo Harness
2xTech Servitors
2xGun Servitors-Heavy Bolters

2xTactical Squad-231pts
Sergeant-Terminator Honours, Chainsword and Bolt Pistol
7 Astartes-Bolters
Astartes-Flamer
Astartes-Missile Launcher
Rhino

2xTactical Squad-226pts
Sergeant-Terminator Honours, Chainsword and Bolt Pistol
7 Astartes-Bolters
Astartes-Flamer
Astartes-Heavy Bolter
Rhino

2xTactical Squad-240pts
Sergeant-Terminator Honours, Chainsword and Bolt Pistol
7 Astartes-Bolters
Astartes-Plasma Gun
Astartes-Lascannon
Rhino

Assault Squad-265pts
Sergeant-Terminator Honours, Power Fist, Combat Shield and Bolt Pistol
7 Astartes-Chainsword and Bolt Pistol
2 Astartes-Chainsword and Plasma Pistol

Assault Squad-260
Sergeant-Terminator Honours, Power Weapon and Bolt Pistol
7 Astartes-Chainsword and Bolt Pistol
2 Astartes-Chainsword and Plasma Pistol

Devastator Squad-316pts
Sergeant-Terminator Honours, Power Fist and Bolter
5 Astarter-Bolter
2 Astartes- Heavy Bolter
Astartes-Missile Launcher
Astartes-Plasma Cannon
Rhino

Devastator Squad-320pts
Sergeant-Terminator Honours, Chainsword and Bolter
5 Astartes-Bolter
2 Astartes-Lascannon
Astartes-Multi Melta
Astartes-Heavy Bolter
Rhino

Total-3225pts

I intend on adding Saul Tarvitz and Lucius(using the rules for The Emperors Champion) as well as 2 Preadators, a Land Raider, a Jetbike Squadron and a Thunderhawk(which i will scratch build)

Comments and Criticism welcome

That would certainly look AWESOME on the gaming table...

If you plan on using Deep Strike to deply your Assaulters, I would personally use flamers rather than Plasma Pistols. Templates are far more effective when you can pick your targets up close and personal.

Thanks Shroud. As the assault marines are part of the space marine battle company I can't deep strike them without putting every other unit in the army except Eidolon in reserve as well per the rule that apocalypse formations count as a single unit for the purposes of deployment. I think I'll change them so that I have one flames and one plasma pistol in each squad.