I swear, that banana is going in my next smoothie...

This is a joint comic. I'll have people from this forum plus people from SA.net.

I already have one person signed up from here. So I'll need one more person. Anyone is accepted, just have a reasonable amount of sprites and easy poses to work with.

1. Crocozaurus the Eradicator
2.

I also need someone to make a box sprite that I can use for a logo. Has to be at a diagonal angle so you can see the top and two sides. About 100x100 to 150x150. It'd be appreciated.

Don't worry, I'll also be continuing E.S.F.T also.

I'm also on a week punishment. My computer has accounts you log into and my parents changed my password so I had to log into my sisters to sneak on. I can't get to my sprites and backgrounds until Saturday. So that's why they'll be a lack of activity for a little while.

Okay people, you see the thing here? I can't actually continue the comic...without a cast...

Make a cast. This may seem hard but all the poses you really need are;

Standing.
Walking.
Two running poses for continued running.
Attack 1.
Attack 2. (An air attack preferably.)
Waiting pose, Eg. (Crossing arms, looking around whilst not being talked to.)

And that's it.

If you feel that, if you do create some sprites, and you worried about how they look post them in the Fan Sprites section, you'll get C+C on how to improve them, and it'll make you a better spriter to.

The Comic:
The text bubbles hold in the words and letters well, but the tail of the bubble, can be lost in a dark background. For Example. In IAFAG 21 (Totally not a plug.) You can see who is talking easily but in your comic, you don't have many lines, in fact the only bubble to have a line to the character is the first one.

Secondly the third panel has 4 dots, to the side of the character, I assume these are there to show he is speechless, but you can bubble them too. Also his reaction is somewhat under dramatized, for the entire third panel you could of just resized the area around his head to match the size of the other panels, and have his eyes a even smaller looking.

And finally the text it doesn't need to be that big, taking another example from IAFAG 21 all of the text is size 8 Ariel which is big enough to read, but small enough to not choke your comic. It also gives you an edge in lots of text comics. Also resizing your backgrounds and characters, bring us closer and allows you to add better facial expression. (But if your not comfortable with it, don't bother.)

As for the joke; it was quite good, I have personally done a lot worse.

But overall it's a good comic, I advise you to continue. And I'm not going to try and go against your morals, but you really didn't need to censor "D-a-m-n" (Swearing for educational purposes.) it's your comic, and you can do whatever you want with it.

And in no way is this response an attack on your comic or your ability, it is only a helpful guide to what can improved you don't have to take my advice. But you'll make better comics if you do.

Well, obviously, I don't need a tail for this comic because there is one character...

I do the asterik '*' censor to sort of there being a bleep noise. Kinda ridiculous, but I find bleep noises funnier than the actual curse.

Make a cast sounds nice...if I wasn't such a lazy bum. <:|

Lol, random. I liked it. XP

Eek-eek. :3

Yeah, I decided to go ahead and start the even though I got 3 people. Probably be a bigger hassle with 4 people like before. Next scheduled update if plans go good will be this Saturday. Comment and all that.

Bionca a.k.a 'Vivid Girl' is © to Belphegor
Eonous a.k.a 'Demonic Keebler Elf' is © to Onchou-Ame
Crocozaurus sprites is © to..well...Crocozaurus
Rad sprites is © to Crocozaurus. (Pointing sprite edited by me)
Background is © to Chaotic Sprite Backgrounds

Nice. =D

Except Croc's skin seems too light and his eyes have too little contrast compared to what it was last I checked. If I were you, I'd go to my sprite topic more often. =P

That's where I got them. :\

Unless they were on page 2...

...

Yay, another comic. Smile and clap.



Croc...why?...WHY?!

Next update: Monday

Raging Demon is such an old attack of mine.

Funny in this situation =>, but old. =<

As for the sprites, check the bottom of the first page.

He's going to be using it alot then. Tough. O:<

He was going to use it again in the next comic, expect it most likely tomorrow.

yo Rad, nice comic, if your still looking for cast members you can use Twister Prower here are his sprites:

http://i45.photobucket.com/albums/f84/ejw1...ersprites-1.png

Sorry Twister, position has already been filled. I might put you in a cameo some time though.

Another comic for whatever viewing fans I've mustered up. :D



Sorry it's later than the deadline, had some trouble getting to the comp for the past few days and haven't been able to work on it, but here it is now. Enjoy!

Can I be in? You have my sprites right?

Ouch That's gotta hurt ;) ...

What's wrong with long hair anyway?
I just say it's better than being bold. Got long hair myself (well, not as long as that character but hey...)

I dunno Croc looks like he is kind of annoyed by the fact that no one makes him leader or disagrees with him. Quite funny actually :TailsSmile:

Funny, yes. In character, not really. =/

I better do Raging Demon on you next, for screwing up my character.

That smarts, you know that? D:

Striker: Anymore characters and this would be too hard to manage. Already takes a while already.

Thierry: Thanks.

Crocozaurus: He changes in the next comic.

Cypher: Yes it does...alot...

Sorry it's taking so long. Problem with time and such, and with school starting back up, it's going to be harder to update as is. I'm making a comic right now and will try to have it up by Saturday. I start school this coming Monday.

Sorry for the lateness, school has started back up and I've been greatly restricted from the computer. I might try to have updates every weekend. Bah, school. Ah well.

Accident in school left me inactive for a while. Working on the next comic.

Okay, wow. LONG TIME. Surprised it hasn't been locked. It took way too long. School is way too annoying, and I barely get on anymore. I'll force myself to spit out a comic this upcoming weekend. Till then, enjoy.

(BTW, borrowed a face from Croc)



Ray is a cameo character from SA.net.

LOL. Teh shoop da whoopness. (Okay, I'm horrible with puns.)

Nice one, Rad.

Ribs ribs ribs ribs ribs ribs ribs ribs REEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEBBBBBSSSSS. =3

Nice one.

xD

I'll start to notify people when I'll need a cameo char. Ray is a SA.net cameo

Comic...

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Yay...

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kthxbai...

EDIT: I just noticed that the comc is incomplete. Mouths weren't edited for speech and some boxes weren't directed to the right people. It's not a minor defect but something I might fix later. Thank you.

Tell Mr. Bangs that I do have eyeballs. That's how I can see his ridiculously long bangs in the first place. D=<

Nice one.

IMMA FIRIN' MAH NEXT KAWMIC!!!



BLAAAAAAAAAAAA!!!

© to Crocozaurus for the blast.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ZQLKEZzBIZE

For those who really want to get it, you must watch the video above. It's hilarious. Here are a few others. You'll be hooked on lazers for months. xD

http://www.newgrounds.com/portal/view/468205
http://www.newgrounds.com/portal/view/434120
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=lOZ0xl_UsPE
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Pli6L01W0X4&feature=related
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=hSVNbxjdvv8&feature=related

EDIT: I can't believe I forgot to edit the mouths again. =.=

Er...why are my eyeballs white on panel 3?

Also, in all honesty, I have actually never played a Street Fighter game in my entire life. =O

Unless you count Marvel vs. Capcom...and M.U.G.E.N...but I specifically said Street Fighter, so.....

Yeah, nice.

Made it funnier...

DEAL WITH IT!

OH WHAT THE FLIPPING HECK DR OCTOGONAPUS! I SAW HIM BEFORE


LOl, good one, Rad.

OH NOM NOM TURKEY!

Sorry for the late update, but I wanted to wait for Thanksgiving to continue, and needed to wait a little after that. I wanted to finally get out of that same dreadful background. -,-

Time for a house. :D

Next comic won't be up for a while since I'm on punishment, but it will be a slightly big comic.

Until then, peace.

Rad running sprite edited by me.

Why are my eyelids suddenly skin-colored? D=

And why am I being picked on anyway? D=

And why do I think this is a nice comic anyway? D=

.....

Yeah, but seriously, nice comic.

How about you shut up? D=

Kiddin, thx

Not an update by me, but by GracehFaceh, the owner of Eonous. She's a great drawer, but she drew it the way she did as a rememborance to her old comic. Here's the link. My update comes this weekend.

http://rad-riardos.deviantart.com/art/Retu...comic-105970401

I like the comic. It has some quite good gags (especially the DOCTOR OCTOGONAPUS one. BLAAAH!)

Thanks.

Another comic goodness. Gonna start working on Christmas and New Years comics and then continue on the normal comic. Enjoy for now, might be inactive again for a while. School troubles and what-not.

Woo, house. =D

Nice comic, Rad.

I'm pausing the comic for now. Since my scanner is working, I'm planning on drawing my comics now. I'm pausing so I can practice drawing everyone's character in different forms and fashions. I'll upload each character when I finish their drawing sheet. I'm not ending the comic, just properly converting it since I stopped Supreme Randomness when scanner issues came up. The comic will most likely resume late January, but I hope I can continue the comic earlier.