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Weegee - June 29, 2008 02:46 AM (GMT)
YEESS I'm making a new comic series called Failure! Here be episode one.

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Edit: Just now relized I made a typo. xD

Crocozaurus the Eradicator - June 29, 2008 02:48 AM (GMT)
It's not that big. O_o

It's actually...kinda small.....

Photobucket shrinks big images. Use Imageshack.

Other than that, nice. Pretty funny. xD

006 - June 29, 2008 02:52 AM (GMT)
This comic is one. The parachute gag you used is a dead cliche, and others will probably be, too.

Pink Godzilla - June 29, 2008 06:01 AM (GMT)
Photobucket doesn't shrink the image if you set it to 1 megabyte file size.

Garage - July 11, 2008 08:29 PM (GMT)
The Bad

1. No credits.
2. Over used blur effects.
3. Speech Bubbles needed.
4. Tails' Bi-plane jolts upwards suddenly, I.R.L Bi-planes aren't Helicopters.
5. Cracks disappear, in last panel.
6. Title would better above the comic. Also the black wastes a lot of space.

The Good

1. Nice use of background.
2. Nice use of Sprites.
3. Using cut off's during mid sentence.
4. Good use of effects, (Cracks in the ground and the sand coming up.)
5. Not a bad joke to start a comic off.
6. Even and clean borders.


Weegee - July 11, 2008 09:44 PM (GMT)
QUOTE (Garage @ Jul 11 2008, 09:29 PM)
The Bad

1. No credits.
2. Over used blur effects.
3. Speech Bubbles needed.
4. Tails' Bi-plane jolts upwards suddenly, I.R.L Bi-planes aren't Helicopters.
5. Cracks disappear, in last panel.
6. Title would better above the comic. Also the black wastes a lot of space.

The Good

1. Nice use of background.
2. Nice use of Sprites.
3. Using cut off's during mid sentence.
4. Good use of effects, (Cracks in the ground and the sand coming up.)
5. Not a bad joke to start a comic off.
6. Even and clean borders.

1. Yeah, I think I should've used a smaller blur tool. >_<

2. I know, Sonic jumped off. So it looks like he's actually falling.

3. Didn't get that last part.

Neku - July 12, 2008 03:18 AM (GMT)
QUOTE (Weegee @ Jul 11 2008, 04:44 PM)
QUOTE (Garage @ Jul 11 2008, 09:29 PM)
The Bad

1. No credits.
2. Over used blur effects.
3. Speech Bubbles needed.
4. Tails' Bi-plane jolts upwards suddenly, I.R.L Bi-planes aren't Helicopters.
5. Cracks disappear, in last panel.
6. Title would better above the comic. Also the black wastes a lot of space.

The Good

1. Nice use of background.
2. Nice use of Sprites.
3. Using cut off's during mid sentence.
4. Good use of effects, (Cracks in the ground and the sand coming up.)
5. Not a bad joke to start a comic off.
6. Even and clean borders.

1. Yeah, I think I should've used a smaller blur tool. >_<

2. I know, Sonic jumped off. So it looks like he's actually falling.

3. Didn't get that last part.

whoa...talk that's a lot of bad stuff








no matter what,it seems nice.Please make more

Garage - July 12, 2008 10:37 AM (GMT)
QUOTE (Weegee @ Jul 11 2008, 09:44 PM)
QUOTE (Garage @ Jul 11 2008, 09:29 PM)
The Bad

1. No credits.
2. Over used blur effects.
3. Speech Bubbles needed.
4. Tails' Bi-plane jolts upwards suddenly, I.R.L Bi-planes aren't Helicopters.
5. Cracks disappear, in last panel.
6. Title would better above the comic. Also the black wastes a lot of space.

The Good

1. Nice use of background.
2. Nice use of Sprites.
3. Using cut off's during mid sentence.
4. Good use of effects, (Cracks in the ground and the sand coming up.)
5. Not a bad joke to start a comic off.
6. Even and clean borders.

1. Yeah, I think I should've used a smaller blur tool. >_<

2. I know, Sonic jumped off. So it looks like he's actually falling.

3. Didn't get that last part.

The backgrounds you used were well placed. And not as common as others.

Weegee - July 30, 2008 02:37 AM (GMT)
New comic! O noz! Well...Technically panel...Picture...Thing.

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knnywood364 - July 30, 2008 03:13 AM (GMT)
QUOTE (Weegee @ Jul 29 2008, 10:37 PM)
New comic! O noz! Well...Technically panel...Picture...Thing.

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You should switch the position of the word bubbles because people read from left to right.

Weegee - July 30, 2008 03:26 AM (GMT)
QUOTE (knnywood364 @ Jul 30 2008, 01:13 PM)
QUOTE (Weegee @ Jul 29 2008, 10:37 PM)
New comic! O noz! Well...Technically panel...Picture...Thing.

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You should switch the position of the word bubbles because people read from left to right.

In Manga, yeah. But this is a comic, not a japanese comic book. XP

knnywood364 - July 30, 2008 04:25 AM (GMT)
No, I mean normally. You start at the left and read towards the right.

Hiroko Kitsune - July 30, 2008 01:18 PM (GMT)
:lol: Lol, I like this comic! =D Hope you update soon!

Weegee - July 30, 2008 04:41 PM (GMT)
update lol.

Still a picture, panel, pie, thing.

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If you can't read Shadow's text, it says, "Told you he was stupid..."

Hiroko Kitsune - July 30, 2008 05:30 PM (GMT)
Ah, The classic joke, Nobody ever gets tiered of it xD

Luptor Monkeyspank - September 1, 2008 01:56 AM (GMT)
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Yeah, it's my, and Croc's three month anniversary. ^^

But, if you don't get the last joke, it's refering to...Well...Yeah, PM me if you don't know. xD

Crocozaurus - September 1, 2008 01:57 AM (GMT)
Or me. I know, too. =D

Anywho, liked it, love. Happy anniversary. <3

Shadre - September 1, 2008 08:17 PM (GMT)
It's very sweet. I like how you use opposite genders. xD

Luptor Monkeyspank - September 6, 2008 01:23 AM (GMT)
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You gotta see, 'TFS Dragon Ball Z Abridged Parody Episode 5' To understand this one. xDD

Neku - September 6, 2008 02:18 AM (GMT)
lol I got the idea xD

Super Sonic - September 6, 2008 07:48 AM (GMT)
That was funny. I got it. xD

Mace Shizamaku - September 6, 2008 07:58 AM (GMT)
Okay! I understood that one XDDDDDDDDDDD

Luptor Monkeyspank - September 6, 2008 04:22 PM (GMT)
Hay~! People responded to my comic. :3

Luptor Monkeyspank - September 7, 2008 07:40 PM (GMT)
Double post. :[

Who here wants a FILLER?!

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Neku - September 7, 2008 08:09 PM (GMT)
QUOTE (Luptor Monkeyspank @ Sep 7 2008, 02:40 PM)
Double post. :[

Who here wants a FILLER?!

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was that Chaos in the filler?

Luptor Monkeyspank - September 7, 2008 10:03 PM (GMT)
NO, THAT WAS HIS EVIL TWIN. Yes. Yes it was.

Shadre - September 7, 2008 10:05 PM (GMT)
Background people!


I also need to add 4 words.

Neku - September 7, 2008 11:10 PM (GMT)
QUOTE (Luptor Monkeyspank @ Sep 7 2008, 05:03 PM)
NO, THAT WAS HIS EVIL TWIN. Yes. Yes it was.

I fail on so many levels then

1.the black stripes on his shoes are supposed to be red

2.he always has his jacket open

3.he has more than one blue spot

4.his eye color is green

Luptor Monkeyspank - September 7, 2008 11:50 PM (GMT)
QUOTE (Neku @ Sep 8 2008, 09:10 AM)
QUOTE (Luptor Monkeyspank @ Sep 7 2008, 05:03 PM)
NO, THAT WAS HIS EVIL TWIN. Yes. Yes it was.

I fail on so many levels then

1.the black stripes on his shoes are supposed to be red

2.he always has his jacket open

3.he has more than one blue spot

4.his eye color is green

So, tell me this, exactly why do I care about your overpowered fan character?

Neku - September 8, 2008 12:15 AM (GMT)
QUOTE (Luptor Monkeyspank @ Sep 7 2008, 06:50 PM)
QUOTE (Neku @ Sep 8 2008, 09:10 AM)
QUOTE (Luptor Monkeyspank @ Sep 7 2008, 05:03 PM)
NO, THAT WAS HIS EVIL TWIN. Yes. Yes it was.

I fail on so many levels then

1.the black stripes on his shoes are supposed to be red

2.he always has his jacket open

3.he has more than one blue spot

4.his eye color is green

So, tell me this, exactly why do I care about your overpowered fan character?

....nevermind


I get back 4 days days ago & you're already making my character look like a fool(I didn't do jack to your character now did I?)

& he's not overpowered!

Luptor Monkeyspank - September 14, 2008 02:38 PM (GMT)
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This was made from boredom, and getting tired of watching the same video, OVER, AND OVER AGAIN. :[

Oh, wait, no. Happy birthday, I forgot when it was.

Ryan Prower - September 14, 2008 02:42 PM (GMT)
Yay for growth spurts! xD Maybe Ryan will be taller then him finally next year. Least he's not a shrimp anymore.

Neku - November 23, 2008 02:21 PM (GMT)
Sorry if I bumped

When's the next one gonna be out? =P

Chip - November 23, 2008 07:23 PM (GMT)
QUOTE (Neku @ Nov 24 2008, 12:21 AM)
Sorry if I bumped

When's the next one gonna be out? =P

Whenever I find Chip sprites. xD

Neku - November 23, 2008 07:49 PM (GMT)
That's starting to sound awesome!

Bluefire the Fox - November 24, 2008 12:21 PM (GMT)
QUOTE (Chip @ Nov 23 2008, 03:23 PM)
Whenever I find Chip sprites. xD

Sprite edits suck.

They encourage lack of originality.

They encourage fan characters.

If I could I would prevent every sprite editor in the world from getting those sprites.

A pox on Chip sprites.

Neku - November 24, 2008 04:57 PM (GMT)
QUOTE (Bluefire the Fox @ Nov 24 2008, 07:21 AM)
QUOTE (Chip @ Nov 23 2008, 03:23 PM)
Whenever I find Chip sprites. xD

Sprite edits suck.

They encourage lack of originality.

They encourage fan characters.

If I could I would prevent every sprite editor in the world from getting those sprites.

A pox on Chip sprites.

Quit whining!That's how we make our fan characters

Chip - November 25, 2008 01:00 AM (GMT)
Filler, to tide you all over.

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First one: I was playing tag in SRB2, the guy was standing there, so I went behind him, not knowing he was it. I typed that exact thing before I ran. xD

Second one: O NOE! WHICH ONE IS ME!?

Hint: It's not the pink one.

WereSonic - December 31, 2008 11:37 PM (GMT)
Here's a comic for the awards. :3

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Seriously. Sak? Sako? Saki? WUT.

As far as I know, only three or four people here make Music videos, but I can only think of Trixie and I.

Saki - January 1, 2009 08:28 PM (GMT)
QUOTE (WereSonic @ Dec 31 2008, 06:37 PM)
Here's a comic for the awards. :3

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Seriously. Sak? Sako? Saki? WUT.

As far as I know, only three or four people here make Music videos, but I can only think of Trixie and I.

exactly my point about the award




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