Thought this would be a fun idea! =D
Although I don't have time to create prizes with school coming, sooo I'm gonna have to offer the winner a uncolored pen sketch, and it will be in my style of drawing aheheh. ^^;
This is more for fun anyway! =D

1st: 2 uncolored pen sketches
2nd: 1 uncolored pen sketch
3rd: 1 uncolored pen sketch

Way of judging: poll

Rules: No Yaoi please, and nothing beyond pg of course, also nothing you've previously written, fresh poems are cool. ^^

Info: Ok I'd been writing a lot more poetry, (Not entering through ^^; )
And I thought it'd be mega interesting.
Ok requirements: Write two poems in the eyes of your fan character, whether it'd be about a lost love or the general feelings of the character, dig into their personalities and pull out what they feel, then put it in words.

Also no 4 sentence poems, make it as long so more people can enjoy it. =D


Starts: Now
Ends: September 12th

Whoot! =D

I will join this contest. I don't got a poem yet about my fan chars but I am already thinking about one as I speak.

Wouldn't a more appropriate name for the contest be... more appropriate?

Probibly one of the best contests IN the world. :TailsHappy: I'm deffinately in. ^^

ok i will defently join i LOVE poetry

Hey, poems. =D

I'll try and get one in. =]

alright my poems are finished and margo is a girl, chandler is a boy. hope that you like it


Margo’s poem:

At home is a totally different story then when you’re by your friends
There seems to be this big dome around you and I am only aloud in at certain times
Everybody knows that you like me, so what’s to hide
Could you be afraid that I will say no
I can tell you all the words for love but my love for you is much grater then them all
When you almost kissed me I was should have let you, but we weren’t alone that night
I no longer can listen to that one song you sang to me because I’m reminded me of the
Night I fell back into love with you.
My only wish is for us to be together for once in my life, that way I can be happy
The time has come for that dome of yours to finally break so we can get that kiss we’ve
Been waiting for, I know that this is right.




Chandler’s poem:

She is the one in my heart that keeps me dreaming about my everlasting love for her
I am lucky for someone like this, but why isn’t she just this cool anywhere else
This girl has finally talked to me but I created this large area where she is aloud every
Now and then so I am not embarrassed
Everybody knows that the Northern star is always the prettiest and she is that star
Still I am unable to be by her in school its because my friends, they might laugh at me
She is the most special thing to me and I might never now what it feels like to have her be
Mine and only mine for a while
I tried to kiss her but it just wasn’t the perfect timing with that other friend there
I’m almost positive that she doesn’t love me back and I even sang part of a song to her just like this: Because tonight will be The night that you will fall for me
So tell, me please tell me, I must know. Would you like to end my dreams about you
And have them become about you and I together and most important our first kiss
You my beautiful dream girl are the light of my life from now to the rest of my entire life

Ooh, sounds fun <3
Also...Yaio?Dew yew mean yaoi? >A> --loves yaoi and yuri--

Anyways...I'll try and come up with some as soon as I can. :D

A poem about Thierry's (male) feelings. (Thierry is a mirror image of myself (with a few changes of course :twink08: ))

Why do I feel misplaced and misunderstood,
As if a dark veil covers me with uncertainty and questions.
I keep struggling with my past, why was I to be left alone,
In darkness.
I felt more lonely as I turned each stone,
Searching for answers and comfort in that zone.
I cry, cry like the young child I was before,
Left alone with markings of my family.

I felt alone in this world, with sorrow and grief
I hated my life and what it has become,
It all where things that couldn't be undone.
I met a person, similar to me.
I felt at comfort with him,
It was an indescribable thing.
A feeling I thought to have lost, in the darkness of my past.

He was my ally, a companion, a friend.
Would he be in trouble, I would never forgive.
We both suffered great losses, and I am sorry for that,
Was I to blame? was I the one that brought his loss? Was I that pesky rat?
No... I felt sorry for him, that we carried sadness as we live.

Life goes onward and I felt strange things,
The embrace of near death, the feeling of love for my girl.
Still... there is one feeling is still got,
Sorrow that is never to rot.
It is a scar in my life, a scar on my soul,
a scar made from darkness of my past.

Leaving it behind is what I try to do,
everyday and every night, that darkness comes to me.
A blurred image of someone. I don't know him,
but he knows me. He gives me a familiar feeling.
A feeling that I had long ago, the time that loneliness
caused made me go reeling.

Who is this person and why do I know him?
yet another piece of the veil that covers me.
Lost in mind is someone that I am,
Thinking about my cursed past, and the feeling.
In the end there will be truth, I feel it as I sleep,
That is why I must continue onward, to rid myself of the darkness of my past.
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A Poem to Selene's (girl) feelings (it may be a bit romantic)

A feeling I never felt before, my heart as cold as it is,
It was ablaze the first moment I saw you.
My eyes where glued to your presence.
I always asked myself what kind of Love is true.
I finally found out as you found me.

I was forgotten left in the cold,
I hated people for what they are and why they saw me as a monster.
You, you gave me hope and light. I warned you for what I was,
but you didn't care. I like you, untroubled but lost in mind at times,
what is it that bothers you sweety? I love you with my heart and soul.

Is this everlasting love?
I will love him for ever, may he get another girlfriend or not.
I am always thankful that you did not left me to rot,
Rot like the other people did,
No, You treated me like a person and not like some monster.

Hey! This sounds cool! =D I'm joining too! ^^

wow, fantastic poems guys! =D

I'll tag along. Poetry is one of my favorite things to do.

What was I before he came along?
A forgotten song? One that is wrong?
I was a duet singer with no one to sing along
For the song I sung WAS wrong and dumb

All my life, my song, they wanted it changed
it's style made me sound like I was deranged
But it can't change, not the style anyway
The lyrics can always be renamed
but the style is gravity
change it, and I would float away

Can someone keep a style, but change their evil life ways?
Can I see more through the haze? Can I speak a diffrent phrase?
I didn't want this evil addiction craze
But ablaze I'll set fire to myself if I loose my name

Inside I know I'm capable of good
but I wasn't taught the way that I should
the sins of my father, the absence of motherhood

With no guide I headed into the wilderness
where you cock your gun, and die if you miss
I'm not making excuses
I'm just saying how it is

Can you servive after being all alone?
Will your heart remain stone? Will you change once you've grown?
I doubt anything could have been done if anyone had known
I have thrown all my faith out the window

What has happened to me?
I once was a positive imagery
Where does God want me to be?
I see now how he and I don't agree
Can't you hear me now!? now that I'm so angry!?!?
No!?!?!?
Then I should consider myself to be FREE!!!

But I wasn't free, I was jailed in Sing Sing
Paying my debt for my greevious crime spree.
I hated everyone, I had no sympothy
I reflect my father, all his anger within me

I wear the band of my youth in my bangs
the purple ribbon, the bow that hangs
I no longer tie it up, I'de rather it was fangs!
It represents the way I have changed

Am I, as they would usualy say, unique?
Is there a word in Greek? Should I just say "freak?"
I am a freak, a freak who is secretly meek
As meek as a geek to admit I seek someone like me

A father with rage
A marrage that failed
A baby miscaraged
A faith that's drained
It all comes apart now that I am contained
In jail, where good attitudes are trained

But I can't be tamed
my father already tried
All attempts to get through to me have been denied
you can't understand me, if you claim to, you've lied
now to keep me in here I am continuesly framed

No hope in sight, here comes the night
that's where I was, alone in my cell
With all my might, I still lost the fight
I now sit in a cornor, amist all the smell

I bid the world a final farewell


...

...

Silence

...

...


then somthing out of sight, like the bump in the night

...

I hear a voice from near, the next cell, yes it's clear
Someone very near is shedding a tear

an unexpected event,
I didn't know what it ment, maybe a prisoner wants to vent

He ment to speak to me, sombody I can't even see, I plug my ears and beg it not to be

I don't want to speak to him, this is my time
Quite is not a crime, I'll rip him limb from limb! Maybe choke him with a tie

I want it to be silent, leave me to my shame!
You loathing tyrant!! Your to BLAME!!!

But a voice doth rise anyway, his voice like a razor
and he sorrowly cries, saying "hello, I am Jazer."

...

...


That name ment nothing to me for a matter of weeks


But after a manner of months...he is all anyone seeks


He's not a lie, he is the truth!
In God's timing, he came like a sleuth
I never saw it coming, what a fool I was
to think I could control what God wants done

He taught me how, he taught me why
he changed my song, he changed my life
Now whenever I see him, I want to fly
cause now I am free, I am free of all strife

he knows my song, the Chorus, versus, bridge!
My style never changed, I've been given new courage!
He is the other duet, the one I was missing
He understands the song, he never stops listening
never stops listening
never stops listening
and he never stops singing
I never stop singing
we want to never stop singing

Now I am free of my past, the freedom came fast
sin haunts me no longer
it's a clear contrast

What was I before he came along?
A forgotten song? One that is wrong?
I was a duet singer with no one to sing along
For the song I sung WAS wrong and dumb

But now it's diffrent, a new light is within me
There is no one else I ever want to be
I'll stay here forever, in this thing I don't deserve...

I love you Jazer, and the lord that you serve

-Kerri's love poem

Yeah....these aren't all that great. I'm just starting out on poetry. I've got my two main characters, but are in different stories: The look-a-like, Morgan, and the Easily Frightened Pirate, Silverfur.

Morgan’s Poem

I am invisible. I am nothing but the wind that blows in the faces of the blind.
Always mistaken for who I’m not. Can’t they see the way I dance? Can’t they hear the song I sing? I’m not who they think I am. I’m not him. I never was. I’ll never be.

My heart’s been sealed. The key has disappeared from humanity. But alas, why is there one? He’s the one with the deep black and crimson fur. His ruby eyes sparkle when he blankly stares into the bleak nighttime sky.

I wish to see him once again. I want to sit by his side, and watch him stare. I dream of the day, when he’ll look into my clueless sapphire eyes, and press his lips against mine, and the constellations will dance, as shooting stars fill up the sky.

Yet my dreams will crush before I begin to dream. My future is already written in stone. I’m forced into a relationship that I’ll never enjoy. Nobody understands my freedom. The days become closer as the pages off the calendar fall. Then, he, the emerald green male, with the ruby war paint, endlessly sneaking up to me, and telling my fate. I want this to end.

My heart is sealed in this heavy-chained box. Nobody has broken the lock. The black and red one has been close, but he’ll never get to it. My fate is sealed, and it’s over. I wish for my miracle, and everyday I hope to see my miracle again.

Silverfur’s Poem

You’re always there supporting me, even when I mess up. If I break a bone, you’re there. If I mess up a capture, you’re there. When I’m standing on what could be my deathbed, you sit next to me, and cry your soft eyes out.

I make the best effort I can to return your affection. But I feel you can do better than a frightened buccaneer. You’re always so playful and adventurous sometimes I can’t keep up. You always disobey your so-called guardian, just to be with me.

Your love burns with a passion, and yet I cannot return it. I fill up with anxiety as you stand in front of me. My face becomes crimson, and I cannot speak. You’re just too perfect, and I am nothing but a fool.

My sweet kitten, please stay with me, and we’ll conquer the ocean as one. With the crew always behind us, to give us strength, so take my hand, and face the cerulean waters that roar when we pass.

You guys are very talented!!! I'm very very impressed. =D

Can't wait to see who won. Judge us fairly now! XP

How do you plan to judge the poems, by the way? It's a hard thing to judge. O_o

a poll will choose who wins. good luck guys! =D