Sorry If it's big or blurry. My first comic, so this was hard. It took me about an hour.

Edit: I found a typo, when Sonic says: "I Hope you enjoyed this on though." It's suppose to say: "I Hope you enjoyed this one though." Plus, it's supposed to be "Phail" not "Fail" to make it more random.

Honestly, I don't know what happened...

Save it to PNG. 8D

And, I agree with Knnywood. I didn't get what was happening. :c

I'll make it have more sense in the next one, but they're supposed to switch from Random to smart, I'm thinking of a place the black hole might take them. To make the comic less confusing, S.M.A.S.H. and Dark Bolt are rivals (like Sonic and Shadow) they fought, Dark Bolt lost because S.M.A.S.H. dodged the beam, but he stole S.M.A.S.H.'s $100 so S.M.A.S.H. begs for it back, and he gets it if he gets Dark Bolt the ice cream. S.M.A.S.H. knows something will happen next because he was waiting for Dark Bolt to say that the master emerald is gone. Just because he said that the master emerald was missing a black hole opened for who knows why, and S.M.A.S.H. is trying to tell Dark Bolt to calm down, plus S.M.A.S.H. thinks it's a roller coaster.

New issue's here!

Let me explain if you don't understand. I'm reading Harry Potter so I dropped them there in Hogwarts, Dark Bolt hates the place, so he chaos controls them out. Then they end up in Neo Green hill zone and find Sonic, Shadow, and Mephiles. Sonic is being dumb so everyone but Mephiles beats him up. He needed to have new sprites, so he got remodeled by being beaten up (for some strange reason). Hopefully it makes sense now.

Uhm.... was that Echo Hawk in the second comic? Also.... I still don't get it...

Um... That's Mephiles not whoever you said.

That is not like any Mephiles sprite I have ever seen...

Well. Critique time... Sorry if I am rude, but you really need this....

The first one is not good at all. You should've saved in in PNG. not JPEG >.< it's just doesn't look good that way. The "storyline" is too hard to follow. I can't understand any of it. You used poor bordering...(maybe next time you should think of using a template instead of trying to make it yourself. O.o;;) Maybe you shouldn't use paint for the "special effects" of your comic. Unless you can make something REALLY good, or you plan on spening more than two minutes on your special effects on the comic.

On to number two... The sprites were moving around. The speech bubbles weren't good at all.... And... you actually used two different styles of Sonic sprites in the comic. I'm sorry but that just lands yoou no good points at all in the comic "industry" unless you were doing a joke with the two different styles, which you were'nt.

In all honesty. I'm sorry but I have to give you a 0/10

Poor effort, very poor indeed...

I'm going to hire 2 people to help me with the comic.

I'll help! 8D

I can help really well. c:

He talked to me about that last night,and he said it would probably be me and Morgan... ._.

Note I said probably, I might need 3 people, so Luptor Monkeyspank, you can help

W-Wait, why do you need three people to work on ONE comic? What'll I do? D:

Oh, Koko, here's the Mephiles sprites, Mephiles.

O.o I stand corrected.... I could've sworn..... it looked so much like Hawk....

I'm saying if I need help, run out of ideas, or want to add their characters. Virinda, Morgan, and you have been chosen.