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Title: Poetry of mine


My Immortal - October 16, 2008 01:50 AM (GMT)

RikuZegram - October 16, 2008 04:11 AM (GMT)
To be honest, I dont care much for poetry, but i decided to read yours, just for you. :) DA doesnt load really well for me, but I did check a few out. Blood Stained Tears is my favorite of the four I read. Not Anymore was really good too!
Does this just come natural to you?

My Immortal - October 16, 2008 02:25 PM (GMT)
QUOTE (RikuZegram @ Oct 16 2008, 04:11 AM)
To be honest, I dont care much for poetry, but i decided to read yours, just for you. :) DA doesnt load really well for me, but I did check a few out. Blood Stained Tears is my favorite of the four I read. Not Anymore was really good too!
Does this just come natural to you?

well my dad studied Poetry in collage,and he wrote alot. ^^; so I guess so. ^^;

I can PM you the full out poems if you want. ^^;

RikuZegram - October 17, 2008 04:45 AM (GMT)
That'd be great! I cant really load some of them from deviantart (like the last poem)

My Immortal - October 17, 2008 04:49 AM (GMT)
ok ^^; I'll do that after school tomorrow

RikuZegram - October 17, 2008 05:06 AM (GMT)
Did you add more? Anyways, no rush! Just when you can, okay?

My Immortal - October 17, 2008 05:21 AM (GMT)
added more,yes. =) Yes I did.I guess I can PM them to you before I fall asleep. xD

RikuZegram - October 17, 2008 04:06 PM (GMT)
BTW, I really like the last bit of poem on ur sig!

My Immortal - October 17, 2008 10:34 PM (GMT)
Thank you!I must go and write that poem for my teacher. xDD Sacred Paperclip. xD

RikuZegram - October 18, 2008 05:14 AM (GMT)
...huh? Sacred Paper Clip?

My Immortal - October 18, 2008 08:06 PM (GMT)
ya,the sacred paper clip. xDDD You might like it. xD

RikuZegram - October 26, 2008 06:46 PM (GMT)
sounds weird enough for me! =3

~*Anime_Gal*~ - December 6, 2008 03:06 AM (GMT)
DDDX God why do I keep bringing back OLD topics of mine? DX

Well, I'll just start posting links in my 1st post. DX Well, update:

Sacred Paperclip

Only Angels Can Fly

Needing Hunger

Fallen

Blood or Tears?

A Bird's Song Like No Other

~*Anime_Gal*~ - December 6, 2008 03:30 AM (GMT)
No Need

Another one. DDX I know, Not alot...wait, alot, yes alot.

Stranded

DXX

~*Anime_Gal*~ - December 18, 2008 01:18 AM (GMT)
I have two new ones.

This is What I Hate

And, A hand written one:

You were with me side by side,
The morning faded over the year,
I knew you so well I gave you things,
But now you're gone from me

You sang so beautifully in my ears,
I may never hear your voice again,
Yet you slipped from my grasp,
And now you're gone from me

You had been sucure in my backpack,
The rain must have slipped in there,
I was a fool to put you there,
And now you're gone to the rain

You no longer sing in my ears,
I will never hear your voice again,
I might replace you with another,
For you have lost to the rain

You might never forgive me,
Me being such a fool,
Replacing your blue soul with another would never be easy,
As you're gone to the rain

You have slipped between my blind fingers,
How could I have not relized,
The heavy rained pocket of my backpack,
You have slipped and gone to the rain

You've vanished yet I still care,
Your slipping life has went,
You are never to be heard again,
You're gone from me alone to the rain




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