Name: Ruby

Age:17

Sex:Female

Type:Bat ^^

Birth place:Wind city (in the sky)

Birth date:27th june

Good or bad: Ruby is good but her aperonce makes people think that she is bad

Family:She has a sister but they were seperated when they were kids. She dose not no who her mum and dad is because she was also seperated from them at the age of 13, so at the age of 13 she has had to fend for herself

Description:Ruby has black hair and silver wings. She wear's a green and white sute with black heels.

Background:At the age of 13 Ruby has had to fend for her-self. Eversince she was seperated from her family she has bin trying to fined them but she has had no look so far.She cant remember were she is from or how she and her family got seperated but she is deturmind to find out.



(i no its just a re-colour)

Cool charctor! ^^maybe sometime strike and her could start a roleplay and strike could help her find her faimly ^^

Hope you don't mind constructive criticism, because I'm about to give you some.

First of all, can't you tell us more about her? You haven't given much information at all, really. What kind of things does she enjoy doing? What things annoy her or make her sad? What's her personality like?

Also, how does she not know who her parents are if she was supposedly seperated from them when she was thirteen? Why does she not remember anything? Did she get amnesia or something?

No offense, but you've really only given us a vague idea of this 'Ruby'...

Otherwise, she's a decent character, but you should also try making her look less like Rouge.

I could try and make her less than a recoulour if you would like me to.

I agree 100% with Chrona. She's a good character, but definitely needs more detail.

Also, I would recommend that you use different colors. As you can see it's just an invert of rouge...