PROLOG! :
A little fox and two little hedgehogs ran through a carpet of bluebells, under whispering trees. They laughed having the time of their lives. Until now... One of the hedgehogs was a green hedgehog, his spikes tipped with yellow. He had bright yellow eyes and a furry chest. He had 3 hairs sticking out of his head, them also, tipped with yellow. He had shoes like Tails’ and two fox’s tails’ tipped with white. The other hedgehog was a yellow hedgehog, his spikes on flames. He had orange eyes, also on fire. He had a chest like Sonic’s. He had plain red shoes, with a devils face on them, still, on fire. The fox was yellow, one long brown hair sticking out of his head. He had green eyes and 4 tails.2 normal tails and 2 metal tails’, all tipped with brown. He had a metal arm and a metal hand, too. His chest was the same as Tails’ and his shoes were a plain red, with long, Red and blue stripes on them. They were playing it, when suddenly the little yellow fox pointed to the trees. “Look,” He said pointing. “Fire!!!” “OH MI GWOSH!!” A voice of evil laughter came from where the fire was. “Fools!” The voice seemed to say. The 2 hedgehogs and the one fox ran around shouting: “RUN FOR YOU’RE LIFE!!!"


CHAPTER 1: The Hedgehog Appears...

They all looked at the fire, in fright. You could just see a hedgehog. He was a yellowy red whit red swirly eyes. He had a chest like Sonics and shoes like Sonics, only torn. He had ripped spikes and a ripped tail. He looked down at the trio. They backed away and looked around.
“I wish we diddent wander away from Sonic...”BF muttered.
“Yhea...” Lightning muttered, looking at the ground.
The wind blew fast, in the trios hair.
“WHAT WAS THAT?!” Lightning said looking around.
A blue hedgehog stood on the tip-top of a tall tree.
“Sonic!” BF, Lightning and Sparkle gasped.
The firehedgehog looked at the hedgehog. His eyes narrowed.
Sonic grinned. “So, Fleetway, long time no see?”
The fire around the hedgehog’s flames grew stronger.
Sonic ran over to BF, Lightning and Sparkle. “You three! Get outta here!!”
“WHERE TOO?!?!?”Sparkle said. BF giggled.
Sonic tapped his foot impatiently.
“Ah... Right...”Sparkle looked at the ground, smiling to himself.
BF laughed and Lightning giggled.
“NOW!!”Sonic was getting angry and he crossed his arms.
Suddenly, a burst of fire came shooting towards them. Because BF, Lightning and Sparkle were small the fire went straight over their heads. “Ohh, pretteh light!”They pointed to the fire.
As for Sonic, it hit him straight in the head.
He was sent flying backwards. “AHHHHH!!”
His head hit a tree, sending him knocked-out.
“SONIC!!” Sparkle ran towards Sonic, followed by BF and Lightning.
As they got nearer they could see a big flame mark on Sonic’s head.
Sparkle burst into flames.
“TAKE COVER!!” Lightning screamed.
“HES GONNA BLOWWWWW!!”BF shouted.
BF put a rock on his back, to protect himself and Lightning put a leaf on his head.
Fleetway Sonic smirked.
“You REALLY think, YOU, weakling can DEFEAT me?!”
“YHEA!!!” Sparkle shouted at him, angrily.
“Bring it on, weakling!” Fleetway smirked.
Sparkle ran fast, towards Fleetway, fire tracks following him.
Lightning ran forward, too, lightning flashing around him, his eyes turning red.
BF flew high into the air, and charged towards Fleetway.
Fleetway laughed. “You must be CRAZY!!”
“Well, we’re not! YOU ARE!!” BF stuck out his tounge.
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Lightning=green hedgehog
BF=yellow fox
Sparkle=yellow hedgehog
Fleetway=firehedgehog

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Chapter 2: The small battle


Fleetway smirked. He looked at BF, Lightning and Sparkle. Then at Sonic.

Sparkle aimed a burst of fire at Fleetway.

Fleetway yawned. “You DO realise that you’re fire attacks won’t harm me. IM ALLREADY ON FIRE!!”

Sparkle stopped. He looked surprised.

“Maybe so, BUT WHAT LIGHTNING ATTACK DO?!”Lightning shouted.

He jumped into the air, lightning surrounding him. He aimed his hands straight at Fleetway. “LIGHTNING BLADE!” The hedgehog shouted. The sky turned black, with black clouds.

Fleetway smirked.

A load of lighting came from the black clouds, heading straight for Fleetway.

Just as the lightning got near him he shouted. “CHAOS CONTROL!”

2 fire emeralds appeared and Fleetway disappeared. He reappeared behind lightning and kicked lightning in the back.

Lightning was sent flying forwards, he hit a tree and was knocked out.

BF’s face turned as black as thunder. Tears filled his eyes. “HOW DARE YOU MESS WITH MY BRUTHER!!”

Fleetway smirked. “What are you going to do? Smack me to death?” He laughed.

BF paused. “Uh... I never thought I would get this far” >.< BF was annoyed.

BF suddenly had an idea. He flew as fast as his tails’ could carry to him towards Sonic.

He landed by the asleep hedgehog.

He got out his emeralds and they began to glow. “CHAOS HEAL!” BF shouted.

Sonic’s eyes slowly opened, showing his emerald green eyes.

“Ugh... What happened?” He muttered slowly sitting up and shaking his head.

“Uh...You were knoweyed out...By Fleetway..!” BF exclaimed

Sonic jumped to his feet. “BF, I need these chaos emeralds!”

He picked up BF’s two chaos emeralds and got out his own. He ran to Sparkle, and got out another chaos emerald. He ran to Lightning and quickly picked up another 2 chaos emeralds, that was by him.
He ran around the whole field, picking up 50 rings.

“SUPER...SONIC!” There was a bright light and Sonic turned a bright yellow. His eyes turned red and his spikes went up, instead of down.

Nice. But don't go through too much with little details. Take my advice. Trust me. Try a little harder and you'll get the writing spark! Unlike me... :(~Seeker