Rookee's Rhyme:

1 LB, back again, / spittin' a free,
2 SA, thinkin' he could top the king, / king bein' me,
3 Have you seen this kid? / He looks like a jewish Harry Potter,
4 To look that fucked up, / you must've not had a mother or a father.
5 Next Generation Spinner? / Nigga you livin' in the past,
6 When'd you do somethin' new? / Oh yeah, when you shoved a pen in your ass.
7 The assassin just got assassinated, / one word at a time,
8 Cause I'm LB, / I just make all your lines, seem like a nursery rhyme.

ShortAssassin's Rhyme:

Man, challenging me in the beginning is gonna be the end of you/
I'm flyer and sicker wit it than a bird with the avian flu/

You think you're so nice, calling yourself the king/
Maybe the king of cock, but that's the only thing/

Looking like Harry Potter ain't bad, you got it all wrong/
Ask your mom, she always wanna fondle my wand/

A Next Generation Spinnger I'm not, it's true/
What I am is a Nigga that Got Sicker than you/

Get outta here your bars are way weaker then mine/
Hell, you only did 4, that shit is 8 lines/

Yo I'm nice like Eriror with the P-E-N/
Only difference is that I write and he spin/

And if I'm spitting nursery rhymes you should take notes/
Only thing you spit on is that dick down your throat/

As you name implies you ain't nothing but a rookie/
Man I'm over here destroyin your career like my name was judge 3/

That's 16. 1 Bar is a 1 of my lines. Rapping follows a ABCB format, not a AABB format.

And you used shit that was in my free, you shouldn't be able to do that, cause both should be released at the same time, and your material shouldn't be based off of what the other person said. I had nothing to base my free off of except how shitty your life is.

Nah thats 8 bars. 1 bar = 2 lines. And there's no predetermined format for rhyming.

@ Your Edit: Well you decided to drop first so that's what happens.

http://forums.hiphopave.net/showthread.php?t=8928

Read their frees there, and then talk to me about 1 bar = 2 lines.

http://forums.datpiff.com/boards/showthread.php?t=25965

Read the frees here. I even said 1 bar = 2 lines in the original thread.

Those niggas suck big balls compared to the people at hiphopave. I'm pretty sure I know my shit about this.

http://www.urbandictionary.com/define.php?term=bar

Ok so we'll do it by lines from now on.

i lol'd at the "fondle my wand" but i had to go with rookee. Also, is "Maybe the king of cock" a compliment or a dis?

Mmk, I wanted to spit more lines actually, but I set it at 8.

You wanna add 8 more lines to yours so its more fair?

Sorry for the mix up, guess I was misinformed.

Naw, I'm fine with it.

Ok. Your shits pretty sick for a freestyle, I wish I could think that fast lol. Hell, if I wasn't able to use your verse for material I would been screwed lol.

The Judge 3 comment cracked me up... but my lack of knowledge or experiance in rap prevents me from being fair here...

Unfortunately , I don't think a lot of people are gonna understand it Eburt :(
It was the one line I was proud of lol.

SA FTW! I liked his better. It made me laugh much more.

All he did was just use the stuff I said against me.

1. No where did I say it had to be a freestlye.
2. This is why you decide who drops first, if you don't think you can come hard enough when you drop first then make the other person drop first.
3. If two people battle in real life, even if it is a freestyle battle, the second person can use what the first says.

LOLOL

i think in real freestyles you have several rounds so that the starter gets achance to reply.

Correct Zombo, I suppose we could do multiple rounds, but it seems like there isn't much interest anyway lol.

Im a man of hyphy, and rookie you got fucked up. But there was one line that SA did that didnt flow well. You guys should record yourselves next time. Im from the bay I should do this shit haha.

Just wait. Rookee will reply with a verse. I think it should be a 2- or 3-round battle, which is the norm.

Well, we didn't say anything about multiple rounds. Maybe we should scrap this "forum game" and use the freestyle thread instead. Rookee wins 10-8?

I don't know how to fuck your life up worse. You can battle FB.

....stupid dumb and hyphy....h-h-h-h-h-h-hyphy.....h-h-h-h-h-h-hyphy.....

Nigga, you can't even type normal, and you expect to be able to type up a rap.