Participants: firebird, Wongton Spin
Conditions: 24 bars in 24 hours

It's on.

hell yea its on
i am goin to own biatch

Since no one listened to Zombo, I split this into a new thread for you guys. You should do it.

ye, east bay 4 life

GO FIREBIRD!

wonton stole my avatar and used it as his sig!

sike you stole my signature and used it as your avatar

wat is the topic madafucka

Lol, nigga doesn't know how to free.

Bro, save the humiliation, and just drop out now. You can barely talk normal, how the fuck are you gonna be able to type a free.

you don't talk normal when you free :dunno:

The thing is, he can't even type normal, so whatever he's gonna free about we're not gonna be able to understand.

i didn't know it was goin to be free my bad didnt read that part
and i will type it normal just so you guys can understand

24 bars? That's a lot lol.

Not in your bars, its bar=line.

You say that to just about every opponent you face against.

It's not my opponent.

24 bars in 24 hours? That makes 1 bar/hour. Such a lot <_<

It's more that it's gonna be difficult to get 24 bars (lines in this definition) of hard material.

aye i have a project to today so i am goin to be a little late
firebird yu go first then i will when i finish my project

firebird you little bitch you were suppose to go first but here is mine

When it comes to this rap game, it becomes a war
As soon as I spit my shit about the bay, your body will hit the floor

I am the hardest nigga who came from the haystack
I was the one to teach canadian faggots like you how to mack

I will disown you of your rapping place
And make you feel like a badass disgrace

All the way from your little sweat glands
To your fucked up carpel tunnel hands

Yeah I am a whole lot better at this hyphy rap
That I will take your maple leaf flagged canada off the map

Your spittin' rhymes will suck, it won't be as good
Cause you didn't come out of my ghetto yay area hood

Canada's a fucking joke, and we all can tell
Since when did you hear a fucking canadian rapper that actually did well?

Man firebird, you think you are good?
Nigga your only talent is wackin' off to your canadian 3 cm wood

Your rhymes will suck, mines are so fresh that they will make u tweak
Just like your momma, hope she can stand straight in about a week

Firebird you think your tha shit when it comes to rapping?
The bay area will fuck you with our underground slappin'

Your nothin to a bay rapper, just lay there and die
cause you're just a poser rhyming faggot who's just bout to cry

All you canadian rappers know only how to say "Ehhh",
But here in 'stack, we shout to you fuckers, ay bay bay, ay bay bay.

did mine last minute hope its good

I know absolutely nothing about Rap. But I do know this. That sucked.

Firebird = Win.

eburt arent u a witeboi? how would u kno about rapping? shit. letz see ur witeass try dis out. give wongton some credit 4 having bawlz to try.

Are you blind? He said he knows nothing about rap...

den he haz no reazon to tlk shyt about it if he knos shyt about it.

Well, you clearly don't know anything about English, so you shouldn't try to type it.

And you are obsessed with squirtle. I mean c'mon. How can I even take you seriously?

Squirtle GTFO.

lol i thought it was webo at first.

you crackers got to stick together, don't chya? :thumb:

That made no sense Tainted.

i know :P
but i can't judge till i see both raps
but i like wongton's alot right now.
REP DAT SHIT NIGGA!

That shit is crap. 1 syllable rhymes through the whole verse, very poor flow. Freeing is supposed to follow ABCB otherwise it sounds like poetry. Yes, his shit sounds more like poetry than rap. This nigga is a disgrace.

When I hear the whittest people say "nigga" or type it, wow. That's poor.

But Im not one to be talking since I didnt send mine in. :unsure:

lol..what the hell was that?

- Flow sucked
- Dissed a country more than the opponent
- A lot of shit didn't even make sense

Who says it's supposed to be ABCB?

If you mean,

I talk a lot of smack, but can't back it up
The mic's a loaded weapon, son, you better wrap it up

as being ABCB, then that really is AA


Unless you meant,

This battle was a pure joke
Nothing spectacular to see
Got me laughing till my sides hurt
How the fuck are you an emcee?

Then that really is AA anyways cause you can combine every 2 lines into one.


Anyways, the main question is who says it HAS to be ABCB? If that were the case, everybody would end up with the same rhyme scheme.


Rap == urban poetry

It should be based on ABCB. Each bar is AB or CB separated by commas. That's just how they are written out. I'm not saying they should strictly be ABCB, but should be based on it.

Hm, fair enough. Sometimes this structure is broken because a line can be extended with multis and whatnot. I personally think that everyone has their own rhyme scheme.

Alright, my bad. I got caught up playing Literati last night. Can go more rounds if you want.

If rap is a war, then I guess I'm a pacifist
I just throw the bodies of my opponents in caskets, bitch
See what happened is, your mom got mad as shit
Cheated with a pig and gave birth to you: her bastard kid
So when you mention haystacks, we all know the facts
You're just a whack Asian who's trying to act black
Disown me of my position? Not by a rapper who's whack
Ask your parents about disowning, they'll know all about that
And teaching me to mack? Nah dawg, I catch chicks like a sickness
The only female knocking on your door is Jehovah's Witness
Jacking off to your mum is what gave me carpal tunnel
To get every last drop of cum I let her use a funnel
She got her daily dose, enough to fill a beaker
I showed her heaven more effectively than a preacher
She mistook me for Harry Potter, but with finer features
Cuz I used my wand to unlock her chamber of secrets
I'm just a homophobe, waiting to slay who's next
He tried wiping Canada off the globe but couldn't locate the US
We don't have rappers, real MCs reign superior here
Unlike E-40, Bubba Sparks and all them Bay area queers
Brought along purple_clover, but here's the big picture:
Fact is, you're both less evolved than his signature
Niggaz line up to get beaten, no matter the venue
Wongton gets eaten like he's next up on the menu

Damn straight.